The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph below illustrates how

the

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children

who are

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aged

inbetween

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between

in between

11 to 16 arrive at

school

in Great Britain within 12 months using four different

transportation

modes

such

as by foot, by

bicycle

,

car

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by car

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and the

bus

.

According to

the bar graph,

children

within a short distance

to

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of

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the

school

used

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use

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transportation

modes like

by

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walking,

bicycle

and

car

while

most of the students

live

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who live

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far away from the

school

had

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used

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use

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bus

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buses

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and

car

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cars

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as

the

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their

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transportation

mode

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modes

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.

Arround

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Around

90% of

school

children

who

are

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live within 0-1

miles

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mile

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that is

really close to the

school

used to walk from their houses,

while

50% and less than 25% of the same

catergory

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category

used bicycles and cars respectively.

Children

in the

above mentioned

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above-mentioned

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catergory rearly

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category rarely

used a

bus

(approximately 5%).

Children

who are living within 1-2

miles

away from the

school

used

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use

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almost every

transportation

mode

such

as walking,

by

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bicycle

,

car

and

bus

in

a considerable proportions

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considerable proportions

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such

as nearly 60%, 77%, 20% and 10% in the respective order.

While

children

who live within 2-5

miles

away from the schools used

a significant proportions

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significant proportions

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from each mode of

transportation

as 25% by walking,

nealry

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nearly

a

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50%

using

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used

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a

bicycle

, approximately 30% used a

car

and 50% used

bus

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a bus

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.

This

shows that the proportions of

children

who used

bicycle

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bicycles

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and

bus

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buses

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seems

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equal in

statisctics

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statistics

when considering

children

who live within 2-5

miles

.

Moreover

,

children

over 5

miles

only used cars and buses to reach the

school

due to

long

distance

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distances

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to travel. the percentages are nearly 30% and 65% respectively.