Some people say that that working at home is beneficial to the worker and the family while others believe that it is stressful to both the worker and the family. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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employee
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on site
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stressful
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dead lines
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deadlines
professional
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professionals
Therefore
, working people might drop their productivity.
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don't
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employees
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profesionalism
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professionalism
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and
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apply
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home
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these kind
of unnecessary stress can be eliminated.
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Moreover
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familiy
unit are employed because of the higher expenses. Correct your spelling
family
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, there can be problems regarding taking care of children and the older adults at Linking Words
home
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employees
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work
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symultaniously
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simultaneously
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possess
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work
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life
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their
life
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the home
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draw backs
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drawbacks
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inability
to meet up Correct article usage
the inability
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deadlines
difficulities
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difficulties
the
assigned objectives and targets and Correct article usage
apply
drop
down in professional relationships within the peers. Correct article usage
a drop
However
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on site
working conditions can take over the control of all its Add a hyphen
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employees
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close supervision on them to achieve future goals and objectives clearly. By doing so the company can understand the strengths and weaknesses of each and Remove the article
apply
ever
team player in the company and arrange training and development programs Correct your spelling
every
accordingly
to develop them.
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even though
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working from
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the working-from-home
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method
to promote stress Use synonyms
free
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stress-free
employee
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life
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happy
family to be maintained.Correct article usage
a happy
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