The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make companies where relevant.
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The two bar charts give information about two reasons for studying among students of five age groups and the number of support they received from employers.
The reason for career in age under 26
group
is the highest, with 80%, the second is aged 26-29, with almost 70%, and the third is aged 30-39, with 55%, the over 49 group
is lowest, with under 20%. The reason for the interest trend is upside-down, the highest is aged over 49 groups
with 70%, and the lowest is Fix the agreement mistake
group
Correct article usage
the aged
aged
under 26 Replace the word
age
group
with 10%. The interesting part is the aged 40-49 group
has the same percentage for both reasons, with 40%.
The group
received
the most support was aged under 26, with over 60%, second Correct pronoun usage
that received
is
aged 26-29, with 50%, followed by Wrong verb form
was
Correct determiner usage
those aged
aged
over 49, with over 40%, the Replace the word
ages
group
received
the lowest help was aged under 30-39, with 30%.Correct pronoun usage
that received
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