The pie charts below compare the proportion of energy capacity in gigawatts (GW) in 2015 with the predictions for 2040.
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given
pie charts display the Verb problem
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energy
capacity percentages of five different sources in 2015, along with
projections for their transformation by 2040.
Overall
, it is predicted to double the total availability from all sources. Notably, solar energy
is expected to see significant
increase, Add an article
a significant
while
the proportion of fossil fuels will decline but will still consist at
a large amount.
The most dramatic prediction is fossil fuels might no longer take almost Change preposition
of
two thirds
, but dwindle to slightly less than Add a hyphen
two-thirds
a
half of the total. Correct article usage
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Furthermore
, solar energy
is forecasted to multiply it’s
proportions by nine times, going from 2% to 18%. Replace the word
its
Although
not as drastic as solar, but still significant expected grow
is wind starting from 5% getting multiplied by around two and a half times, reaching 12%.
As for the remaining two sources, the Replace the word
growth
amounts
of gigawatts Fix the agreement mistake
amount
the
produce is expected to increase, but within the pie chart they are overpowered by the solar and Correct your spelling
they
wind’s
changes. Both of them decline by Change noun form
wind
mere
one Correct article usage
a mere
percent
, which means nuclear Change the spelling
per cent
energy
will go to 22% and the other renewables to 5%.Submitted by bh.iderzaya on
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