15.10.2024 Question 30 Since science and technology are becoming more and more important in modern society, schools should spend more time on teaching these subjects rather than on arts and humanities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Since science and technological progress

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achieved and

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become

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integral part of the developed world, some people have a perspective that school should provide these subjects with more

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in the syllabus,

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of creativity and mortality.

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we ought to implement these advanced achievements in the curriculum, I suppose that the holistic

development

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of

students

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can’t be accomplished without arts and

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subjects. To commence with, proliferations in science and

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have been great companions in the betterment of society: they have increased our living standards,

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as through the internet, our communication capabilities have improved, or thanks to machinery, the pressure on

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workforce has been relieved.

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,

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provides people from distinctive areas

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access

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worldwide network of valuable knowledge;

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,

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job opportunities and success in life, which not only

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stimulates

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the

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of the global economy

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but

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narrow

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the gap between the wealthy and poor countries.

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, incorporating science and

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into the syllabus is indispensable. Because

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they will help

students

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acquire a tremendous amount of information about the innovations of the world so they won’t be left behind. Despite the prominence of

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in

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the curriculum

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, the advantages of

arts

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the arts

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and

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field of studies shouldn’t be ignored. Because these fields can offer

students

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with better emotional intelligence and cultural awareness. Regarding the former, art is food for

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the soul

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, which can help people get rid of monotonous tasks to dive deeper into their own world.

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, through art, individuals can express their thoughts unreservedly, contributing to the

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of

independent thinking

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of

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students

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. In terms of awareness,

humanities

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subjects promote ethical reasoning and moral understanding, helping

students

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navigate complex societal issues.

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,

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can have more valuable knowledge about diverse cultures, histories, and societies,

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fostering empathy and global issues awareness. In conclusion, the advantages of spending more

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for

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in study programs

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explicit, but the acquaintance of arts and

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fields is

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necessary. I believe that schools should strike a balance between these two aspects for

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apply

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comprehensive

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students

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development

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