some people think that the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others believe that businesses mainly benefit. discuss both these views and give your own opinion

These days, we can see global

countries

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with no

another

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, so a group of people

belive

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that

this

factor

help

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them to protect the

environments

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environment

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;

in contrast

, other ones think that

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this

cooperation

have

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several

advantage

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for

trades

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. I subscribe to the second idea owing to

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the

fact that we cannot see the protections that

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global inhabitants to

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elements that destroy surroundings;

however

, when two

countries

cut their

cooperation

with each other the main

works

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that

failes

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fail

are the

business

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businesses

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that have relation with another countrie. On the one hand,

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global

cooperation

with all governments

make

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a situation

that

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where

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scientists can

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on

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the world and

fine

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the main reasons that

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the climet

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climet

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climate

of Earth

alter

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, the forests sectors reduced, ice, in

the

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both North and South Polar, melt

,

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a range of

wilde

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wild

creatures died-out and so on. To illustrate , when they can find the

cuse

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cause

of these matters, they can

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these matters and send their results

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their authorities, but the issues do not change visually;

consequently

, these

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connections

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do not have a lot of

result

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results

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.

On the other hand

,

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cooperation

have

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a number of benefits for businesses to develop and have

a good profits

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a good profit

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.

In other words

, when companies

creat

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items in their

countries

they cannot

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them really

good

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inasmuch as their society is

limmited

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limited

; nevetheless, if they send their goods to other

countries

they can improve their profits.

For example

, the Apple company earn a great deal of money from other

countries

instead

of the USA.

To sum up

, in my view, if the governments become friends with each other,

comapnies

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companies

can

be improve

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in all aspects

instead

of

enviromental

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environmental

factors.