The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The three charts give information about nutrients that are

Sodium

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, Saturated fats and added

sugar

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in usual meals that might be harmful so eating more than enough in the USA.

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sodium

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and saturated fat were used followed by 43% and 37% in

dinner

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, and added

sugar

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consumed less than two quarters in

snacks

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. The percentage of

sodium

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consumption in

dinner

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is approximately two-quarters, 29% in lunch meals

however

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, the lowest amount of

sodium

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breakfast

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which is as much as

snacks

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by 14%. Saturated fat in

dinner

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by 37% is the biggest amount in

this

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category after that

dinner

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is 26% and

snacks

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21%. The littlest is

breakfast

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by 16%. Added

sugar

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with 42% at

snacks

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is the biggest percentage in its category. Added

sugar

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also

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used at 23% in

dinner

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, 19% in lunch and 16% in

breakfast

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. In comparison,

dinner

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sodium

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and saturated fat is more than added

sugar

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however

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snacks

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in added

sugar

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use more than in other meals.

breakfast

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has the littlest and almost the same amount in all

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three categories.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar, dinner, snacks, breakfast with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

178 words

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typical meals
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saturated fats
fibers
sugars
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average
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dinner
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lowest
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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Most of the people in the society enjoy watching crime movies and criminal TV programs. Why do you think people have more interest to watch them? What is the impact to the society due to this?

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Surveillance cameras in banks, offices, shops and streets have been very successful in reducing crime in the workplace and public, but they are also took for their users to spy on people's private business. what problems do surveillance cameras create? what are the solutions?

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