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The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest populations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest populations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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three countries with the highest populations including China, India, and
USA
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the USA
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.
In
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overall
 perspective, China leads the
population
 followed by India and
USA
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the USA
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 respectively. China and
USA
 are the two countries who
has
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most
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the most
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 land areas with 9.388 and 9,147 respectively.
Although
USA
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the USA
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 has
a relatively high land areas
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, it has the lowest
population
 count amongst the three with 327 million.
In
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result
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a result
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of
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that
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, it has the lowest
number of
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density
number
 36.
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, India which has the lowest percentage of urban
population
 of 32% placed
on
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 the second
number
population
. The country has the lowest
number
 of land areas of 2.973, meanwhile having the highest
number
 of
population
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1.354 billion resulting in the highest density
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 the three.
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