The given pie charts illustrate the information on comparison of exported goods of 5 categories in Great Britain over 5 years between 2010 and 2015.
The charts provide key information about the comparison of exported goods of 5 categories in Great Britain over 5 years between 2010 and 2015. The unit is measured in %.
Overall
, it is clear from the chart that the pattern of each category is an upward trend. In addition
, the blue colour
has the highest percentage
. Whereas
the cloudy colour
has the lowest percentage
for both periods.
According to
what is shown, in 2010 the peak was for the blue colour
which was 29% and in 2015 the percentage
increased to 30. Moreover
, the Red colour
was so close to the blue percentage
,
The red colour
percentage
in 2010 was 28 and in 2015 29. therefore
, the lowest in 2010 and 2015 was the cloudy colour
the percentage
was 7 then
10 respectively.
In terms of the purple colour
, the percentage
was close to cloudy color
but Change the spelling
colour
little
higher.
9% in 2010 Correct article usage
a little
then
13% in 2015.Submitted by altammar12 on
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