You recently broke your leg and your colleagues from work sent you get well cards and presents. Write a letter to them and say •Thanks them for supporting you. •Describe how you spend your time. •Explain about your recovery process.

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Dear Colleagues, Happy Monday! Hope

this

email finds you well! I am writing

this

letter to thank you for the gifts and the

well

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cards which I

recieved

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received

yesterday. I think because of your blessings I can recover from my injury soon and will be able to return

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work as well. I can not express my happiness when I got these gifts

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last

night. By reading your wellness cards I felt

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motivated

otherwise

I was losing

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hope to walk properly. But thanks a lot

to assist

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me in my tough period. You know very well I am a very

socialised

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personality and easily get bored at home if I

did

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nothing.

That is

why I am spending my time in a fruitful manner.

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, I am helping my neighbourhood

childs

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to solve their

mathematic

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calculation in a creative way

and

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also

I joined

online

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library where I am able to access numerous books which helps to enhance my knowledge and vocabulary level too. As per the

doctors

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recommendation, I will

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recover from my injury in just 3-4 weeks if I get proper therapies at

hospital

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the hospital

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. He

said to

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me to

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rest properly and

took

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medicines at time. My

well wishers

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support me enough in

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as a medicine for me. I hope I will meet you one of these fine days. Thank you once again for supporting me! Best Regards, Sam.

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task achievement

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coherence cohesion

Effective use of greeting and closing, which adds a personal touch.

task achievement

The letter maintains a suitable and warm tone throughout, fitting for expressing gratitude.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

242 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

get well soon
heartfelt thanks
overwhelmed by your kindness
lift my spirits
thoughtful gesture
convalescence
immobilized
keeping my mind occupied
binge-watching
immersing myself in books
following doctor’s orders
physical therapy
on the road to recovery
making progress
optimistic about
mentally prepared for
tremendous support

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