You recently broke your leg and your colleagues from work sent you get well cards and presents. Write a letter to them and say •Thanks them for supporting you. •Describe how you spend your time. •Explain about your recovery process.

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Dear Colleagues, Happy Monday! Hope

this

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email finds you well! I am writing

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letter to thank you for the gifts and the

well

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good

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cards which I

recieved

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received

yesterday. I think because of your blessings I can recover from my injury soon and will be able to return

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work as well. I can not express my happiness when I got these gifts

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apply

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last

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night. By reading your wellness cards I felt

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motivated

otherwise

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I was losing

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hope to walk properly. But thanks a lot

to assist

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for assisting

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me in my tough period. You know very well I am a very

socialised

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personality and easily get bored at home if I

did

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nothing.

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why I am spending my time in a fruitful manner.

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, I am helping my neighbourhood

childs

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children

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to solve their

mathematic

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calculation in a creative way

and

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also

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I joined

online

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an online

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library where I am able to access numerous books which helps to enhance my knowledge and vocabulary level too. As per the

doctors

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recommendation, I will

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recover from my injury in just 3-4 weeks if I get proper therapies at

hospital

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the hospital

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. He

said to

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told

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me to

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rest properly and

took

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take

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medicines at time. My

well wishers

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well-wishers

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support me enough in

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hard time which

work

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as a medicine for me. I hope I will meet you one of these fine days. Thank you once again for supporting me! Best Regards, Sam.

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coherence cohesion

Improve logical structure by organizing your ideas more clearly within paragraphs.

task achievement

Consider checking for small grammatical errors to enhance clarity.

coherence cohesion

Effective use of greeting and closing, which adds a personal touch.

task achievement

The letter maintains a suitable and warm tone throughout, fitting for expressing gratitude.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

242 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

get well soon
heartfelt thanks
overwhelmed by your kindness
lift my spirits
thoughtful gesture
convalescence
immobilized
keeping my mind occupied
binge-watching
immersing myself in books
following doctor’s orders
physical therapy
on the road to recovery
making progress
optimistic about
mentally prepared for
tremendous support

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You recently broke your leg and your colleagues from work sent you get well cards and presents. Write a letter to them and say •Thanks them for supporting you. •Describe how you spend your time. •Explain about your recovery process.

some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some infomation is too important or too valueable to be shared freely.

Traditional schooling is out of date, boring and stifles a child’s natural talents, various professionals have pushed for an education revolution. Are there alternatives in the education system? Is traditional education doing more harm than good?

It is impossible to help all the people in the world who are in need, so governments should focus on people from their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Many people think cheaper air travel should be encouraged because it gives ordinary people to travel further. However, others think this leads to environmental problems, so air travel should be more expansive in order to discourage people to have it. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.