The chart below shows numbers of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration describes the population of adults who joined the major sports
event
Fix the agreement mistake
events
on
the years 1997 and 2017. In conclusion, Tennis is the Change preposition
in
all time
favourite sport of the legal-aged citizens for Add a hyphen
all-time
both
years; 1997 and 2017.
The highest Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
adult
Use synonyms
participants
came Use synonyms
during
1997, which came from Change preposition
in
Tennis
event with 50,000 individuals. Correct article usage
a Tennis
Additionally
, there was an Linking Words
increased
in Change the form of the verb
increase
Use synonyms
number
of people who Change the article
a number
the number
play
Tennis Wrong verb form
played
on
2017 with Change preposition
in
estimated
55,000. Correct article usage
an estimated
Succeddingly
, it was followed by Football and Rugby with an estimate of roughly less than 50,000 Correct your spelling
Succeeding
participants
Use synonyms
on
2017. Change preposition
in
However
, compared Linking Words
on
the previous two Change preposition
to
decade
Change to a plural noun
decades
on
1997 Change preposition
in
both
sports events only got 30,000 Use synonyms
participants
which is fewer in comparison to 2017.
Use synonyms
Then
it was followed by Swimming and Golf Linking Words
who
Correct pronoun usage
which
have
more than 30,000 Wrong verb form
had
participants
for Use synonyms
both
time Use synonyms
period
between 1997 and 2017. Fix the agreement mistake
periods
However
, Swimming got Linking Words
constant
Change the article
a constant
the constant
number
of Use synonyms
joinees
on Correct your spelling
joints
joiners
both
Use synonyms
timeline
from 1997 and 2017. The least popular event Change to a plural noun
timelines
on
Change preposition
in
Use synonyms
adult
age group Correct article usage
the adult
on
Change preposition
in
year
1997 was Basketball with only less than 10,000 players. Change the article
the year
However
, Linking Words
the
Correct article usage
apply
adult
Basketball players increased in Use synonyms
number
Use synonyms
on
2017 Change preposition
in
with
two times from Change preposition
apply
its
previous population Correct pronoun usage
apply
on
1997 with more than 20,000 Change preposition
in
on
data. Change preposition
apply
Likewise
, Cricket was Linking Words
least
popular Correct article usage
the least
on
Change preposition
in
year
2017 with less than 10,000 Change the article
the year
participans
. Correct your spelling
participants
However
, it was previously known to Linking Words
Use synonyms
adult
Fix the agreement mistake
adults
on
Change preposition
in
year
1997 with more than 25,000 Change the article
the year
participants
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words both, number, adult, participants with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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