The chart below shows numbers of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration describes the population of adults who joined the major sports
event
Fix the agreement mistake
events
on
the years 1997 and 2017. In conclusion, Tennis is the Change preposition
in
all time
favourite sport of the legal-aged citizens for Add a hyphen
all-time
both
years; 1997 and 2017.
The highest number
of adult
participants
came during
1997, which came from Change preposition
in
Tennis
event with 50,000 individuals. Correct article usage
a Tennis
Additionally
, there was an increased
in Change the form of the verb
increase
number
of people who Change the article
a number
the number
play
Tennis Wrong verb form
played
on
2017 with Change preposition
in
estimated
55,000. Correct article usage
an estimated
Succeddingly
, it was followed by Football and Rugby with an estimate of roughly less than 50,000 Correct your spelling
Succeeding
participants
on
2017. Change preposition
in
However
, compared on
the previous two Change preposition
to
decade
Change to a plural noun
decades
on
1997 Change preposition
in
both
sports events only got 30,000 participants
which is fewer in comparison to 2017.
Then
it was followed by Swimming and Golf who
Correct pronoun usage
which
have
more than 30,000 Wrong verb form
had
participants
for both
time period
between 1997 and 2017. Fix the agreement mistake
periods
However
, Swimming got constant
Change the article
a constant
the constant
number
of joinees
on Correct your spelling
joints
joiners
both
timeline
from 1997 and 2017. The least popular event Change to a plural noun
timelines
on
Change preposition
in
adult
age group Correct article usage
the adult
on
Change preposition
in
year
1997 was Basketball with only less than 10,000 players. Change the article
the year
However
, the
Correct article usage
apply
adult
Basketball players increased in number
on
2017 Change preposition
in
with
two times from Change preposition
apply
its
previous population Correct pronoun usage
apply
on
1997 with more than 20,000 Change preposition
in
on
data. Change preposition
apply
Likewise
, Cricket was least
popular Correct article usage
the least
on
Change preposition
in
year
2017 with less than 10,000 Change the article
the year
participans
. Correct your spelling
participants
However
, it was previously known to adult
Fix the agreement mistake
adults
on
Change preposition
in
year
1997 with more than 25,000 Change the article
the year
participants
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Vocabulary: Replace the words both, number, adult, participants with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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