Some people prefer to live in the same place most of their life, but others like to live in different places. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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The decision about where to live is a contentious issue debate,
whereas
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some
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prefer
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in the same
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where they
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up, considering
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stability, but
otherwise
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for some
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live
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in different places could be a good option. I think
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convenionce
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convenience
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where we should live, it could be in the same
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most of
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life or in
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a different
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place
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. On one hand,
people
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in the same
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often value
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stability and predictability. Living in one
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for
long
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time allows
people
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to build
connection
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connections
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with society,
establish
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and establish
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routines that can be comforting and reassuring.
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. Swnath in 1993,
people
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who grow up in a small village
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tendency
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a tendency
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go
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back to their hometown to
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their
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rest of
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their live
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live
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after some years
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to other cities. The reason for
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could
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by some reasons,
such
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as
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maintaining and developing some business legacy from their parent or ancestors, village
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a
healtier
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healthier
wheather
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whether
which good for health
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compared
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to a busy city.

On the other hand
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, there are some various reasons
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added into account why many
people
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chose
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live
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in different places.
Firstly
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, carrier.
People
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used to pursue a
carrier
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career
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aligned with their skills in different places searching for better economic opportunities and
carrier
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career
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advancements.
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,
people
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who graduate from informatics engineering often move to a big city to
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for good opportunities,
due to
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lack
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the lack
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of
opportunity
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opportunities
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in small
town
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towns
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. In conclusion, no matter where is the
place
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people
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chose
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to spend the rest of their
life
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lives
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, they have good reasons for that, and
usually
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they will synchronize it with their needs. Both options could be beneficial for everyone
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of
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the context.
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introduction conclusion present
Clarify your thesis statement in the introduction to give a clear opinion and purpose for the essay.
supported main points
Include specific examples to support the argument for people who prefer living in different places.
logical structure
Strengthen the coherence by ensuring that each sentence logically follows from the previous one within paragraphs.
introduction conclusion present
The introduction and conclusion are both present and adequately address the topic.
logical structure
There are clear paragraphs discussing both views, which helps structure the essay well.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Stability
  • Predictability
  • Connection
  • Community
  • Cultural Exposure
  • Personal Growth
  • Adaptability
  • Open-mindedness
  • Economic Opportunities
  • Career Advancement
  • Relocation
  • Hometown
  • Social Ties
  • Emotional Support
  • Sense of Belonging
  • Thrill
  • Excitement
  • Familiarity
  • Tradition
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