The two pie charts below show total world energy consumption and electricity generation for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The two pie
chart
illustrate information regarding total world Fix the agreement mistake
charts
electricity
production
and energy using
Replace the word
use
last
year.
According to
the energy consumption in the world, oil showed to be the highest with 34.3%. In addition
, coal seemed to be the second in order with approximately 25%. Morover
, Gas Correct your spelling
Moreover
consumed
slightly under 21% Add a missing verb
was consumed
last
year. Combustible Renewable and waste , nuclear, hydro and others
sources of consumption demonstrated the rest of Correct quantifier usage
other
totoal
energy with Correct your spelling
total
percentage
Correct article usage
a percentage
19
% respectively.
In regard to total Change preposition
of 19
electricity
generation in the world, Coal had the highest proportion with almost 40% while
oil had a weak contribution in
Change preposition
to
electricity
production
with only 6.7%. Additionally
, Gas and Hydro had a great influince
with 19,6% and 16.1% . Nuclear had a total Correct your spelling
influence
production
with
15.7% in Change preposition
of
compare
with other sources of generation with only 2.1%.
Replace the word
comparison
Overall
, Oil had a huge consumption effect while
it had a small amount of electricity
production
. On the other hand
, Coal generate
around 40% Change the verb form
generates
electricity
Change preposition
of electricity
while
it consumed
around 25%.Wrong verb form
consumes
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, production with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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