The tables below give information about salaries for graduates and non-graduates in the UK between 2000 and 2010. Please summarize the informartion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about salaries for graduates and non-graduates in the UK between 2000 and 2010. Please summarize the informartion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The tables illustrate the average salaries for graduated and non-graduated employees in the UK in the 2000 to 2010 period.
Overall
,
it is clear that
people having degrees tend to earn more income than people not having one throughout the interval. It is
also
worth noting that the earnings increased gradually corresponding with age. To be more specific, the
labors
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labourers
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with degrees
in
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at
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the age of 22 were
payed
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paid
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for 15,800
pound
Change to a plural noun
pounds
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while
those in the
32 year-old
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32-year-old
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group had
more
Correct quantifier usage
apply
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double than
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