The tables below give information about salaries for graduates and non-graduates in the UK between 2000 and 2010. Please summarize the informartion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The tables below give information about salaries for graduates and non-graduates in the UK between 2000 and 2010. Please summarize the informartion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables illustrate the average salaries for graduated and non-graduated employees in the UK in the 2000 to 2010 period.

Overall

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it is clear that

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people having degrees tend to earn more income than people not having one throughout the interval. It is

also

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worth noting that the earnings increased gradually corresponding with age. To be more specific, the

labors

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labourers

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with degrees

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the age of 22 were

payed

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paid

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for 15,800

pound

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pounds

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while

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those in the

32 year-old

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32-year-old

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group had

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apply

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double than

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

83 words

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The tables below give information about salaries for graduates and non-graduates in the UK between 2000 and 2010. Please summarize the informartion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Many museums charge for admission, while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

some people say that advertising encourages people to buy things they do not need. Others say that advertisements are important sources of information about new products. Discuss both views and give your opinion (Chi Vu)

Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

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