Task 1: (Bar Chart) The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house). The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day

Task 1: (Bar Chart) The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house). The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day
The bar charts show information about the number of
men
and
women
participating in four house chores and the average amount of
time
spent by each gender in doing the chores daily.
Overall
, most
men
and
women
do cooking and it is the housework with the most
time
spent by both genders. The percentage of
women
and
men
who cook
are
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is
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the highest among all categories with 85% and 60% respectively.
Similarly
,
women
account for more than
men
in cleaning with just above 60%
whereas
only 40% of
men
participating
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participate
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in cleaning.
By contrast
, house repairs allocate more
number
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numbers
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than
women
which are 19% and 8% consecutively. Meanwhile, there number is similar in pet care which
are
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is
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around 20% for both
men
and
women
.
Women
allocate more
time
in doing
Verb problem
to
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cooking and cleaning with more than 65
minutes
in
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for
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each task
while
men
spend less than 60
minutes
.
However
, spend the least
time
doing repairs with just 5
minutes
daily meanwhile
men
spend more than a quarter. Both
men
and
women
spend 20
minutes
to take care of pets.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, time, minutes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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