You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend told you recently that he/she had gone to an excellent restaurant. You wonder if this restaurant will be suitable for your birthday party next week. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend about your planned party ask what the restaurant is called and for directions to get there ask what kind of food it serves and if your friend has any particular recommendations from the menu You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Pat,

#minutes #friend #restaurant #wonder #birthday #party #week #directions #food #recommendations #menu #addresses

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Dear Pat, It was great to hear from you

last

week and know about an amazing experience you had at a

restuarant

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restaurant

you went

with

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your family. I wondering if I could get some more details about that place since

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I was planning to celebrate my birthday and I think it could just be the right spot. I'm turning 22 next week and I'd like my party to be at a restaurant where I can find delicious food options and an enjoyable

ambiance

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Although

, I just plan on inviting close friends

this

time. Since

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my birthday is on

friday

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, I want to book a table as soon as possible. I'd like to know the restaurant's name and how to get there

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An address or an important landmark would definitely make my life easy!

Lastly

, what variety of

cusines

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cuisine

cuisines

does the place offer?

Also

, please suggest anything that you think is worth trying. I am really excited to have something different and try new recipes! I hope to see you soon and please try to be there on my birthday! Best wishes, Lavin.

Submitted by lavinramnani8 on Sat Oct 19 2024

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Grammar

Make sure to double-check for minor grammatical errors, such as using "I'm wondering" instead of "I wondering."

Task Response

Include all necessary details to ensure your friend has a good understanding of your requests and plans.

Structure

The letter is well-structured with a clear introduction, body, and closing.

Tone

The tone of the letter is friendly and appropriate for addressing a friend.

Task Response

You provided specific questions about the restaurant, showing engagement with your friend's recommendation.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

182 words

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