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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend told you recently that he/she had gone to an excellent restaurant. You wonder if this restaurant will be suitable for your birthday party next week. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend about your planned party ask what the restaurant is called and for directions to get there ask what kind of food it serves and if your friend has any particular recommendations from the menu You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Pat,

#minutes #friend #restaurant #wonder #birthday #party #week #directions #food #recommendations #menu #addresses
Dear Pat, It was great to hear from you
last
 week and know about an amazing experience you had at a
restuarant
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restaurant
 you went
with
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 your family. I wondering if I could get some more details about that place since
,
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 I was planning to celebrate my birthday and I think it could just be the right spot. I'm turning 22 next week and I'd like my party to be at a restaurant where I can find delicious food options and an enjoyable
ambiance
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ambience
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.
Although
, I just plan on inviting close friends
this
 time. Since
,
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 my birthday is on
friday
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Friday
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, I want to book a table as soon as possible. I'd like to know the restaurant's name and how to get there
?
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 An address or an important landmark would definitely make my life easy!
Lastly
, what variety of
cusines
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cuisine
cuisines
 does the place offer?
Also
, please suggest anything that you think is worth trying. I am really excited to have something different and try new recipes! I hope to see you soon and please try to be there on my birthday! Best wishes, Lavin.
Submitted by lavinramnani8 on

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Grammar
Make sure to double-check for minor grammatical errors, such as using "I'm wondering" instead of "I wondering."
Task Response
Include all necessary details to ensure your friend has a good understanding of your requests and plans.
Structure
The letter is well-structured with a clear introduction, body, and closing.
Tone
The tone of the letter is friendly and appropriate for addressing a friend.
Task Response
You provided specific questions about the restaurant, showing engagement with your friend's recommendation.

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