The table below shows the change in number of people engaged in various physical activities between the years 2001-2009 in Australia (in million people). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
table depicts a comparison five
types of physical activities in Australia. It is measured by numbers in Change preposition
of five
millions
from 2001 to 2009.
Overall
, as it
can be clearly seen Correct pronoun usage
apply
that
running was the activity with Correct word choice
apply
greatest
rise in the number of people. Change the article
the greatest
Whereas
, cycling was the lowest over the years.
According to
the given data in the following table
running started with 1.4 Add a comma
table,
millions
in 2001. it increased rapidly to reach a peak of 2.2 million in 2009. Not only that but the change in Change to singular
million
this
activity also
was 156% which is phenomenal. Whereas
, aerobics began with 1.5 million in 2001. It rose slightly to end up with 1.7 millions
in 2009. Tennis started very low with 1 Change to singular
million
millions
and Change to a singular noun
million
end
up with 1.2 million in 2009. Both aerobics and tennis had nearly Wrong verb form
ended
same
percentages which were ( 11%-15%) respectively
Correct article usage
the same
On the other hand
, both cycling and swimming were nearly similar in the number of people. However
, both of them began with ( 4.5-3.7) respectively in 2001. While in
the following years, people who Correct word choice
In
prefered
cycling dropped more than tennis to end up with ( 3.6-3.3) respectively in 2009.Correct your spelling
preferred
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