The pie charts below describe the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts depict a comparison of online sales for retail sections in New Zealand. They are measured by percentages between 2003 and 2013.
Over all
, as it can be clearly seen that travel was the greatest rise in New Zealand for both years. Correct your spelling
Overall
By contrast
, clothes were the lowest in 2013 and books
were the bottom in 2003.
According to
the given data in the following pie charts, the
online shopping for travel was 36% in 2003. It was higher than 2013 by 7%. Correct article usage
apply
Whereas
, the consumption of books
was 33% in 2013. To illustrate, 2013 was approximately double 2003 in books
. It was 33% to 21%.
On the other hand
, both 2003 and 2013 were nearly similar in clothes and films. However
, 2003 was 24% in clothes. It was greater than 2013 by 7%. While
the online sales for books
in 2003 was
lesser than Correct subject-verb agreement
were
2013
by only 3%Change preposition
in 2013
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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