The line graph shows the past and projected finances for a local authority in New Zealand. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
figure depicts finances for an authority centre in New Zealand. It can be seen in this
chart that the rates avenue and the user charges had the highest dedicated budget both in 2012 and 2022.
The grants and subsidies had the lowest amount. However
, they had an increase in 2015 up to roughly 700 million
dollar
. Meanwhile, the borrowings had some fluctuations over these years, but Change to a plural noun
dollars
it
ended in 2022 at the same cost as in 2012. It plateaued from 2017 to 2019 and peaked at approximately 1500 Correct pronoun usage
they
million
in 2020.
The rates revenue and user charges had an upward trend and increased smoothly without any decline. Therefore
, they had roughly 2500 and 2000 million
of
Change preposition
in
budgets
at the peak point. In general, the total order did not change after these financial changes. Two significant declines Fix the agreement mistake
budget
had
occurred for the borrowings in 2014 and 2020 by 500 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
and 600 million
, respectively.Submitted by aneizehbaz on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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