The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. ag

The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words. ag
The table presents information about
Tutor’s
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the Tutor’s
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salary
and how much they got in 2009 by working at High School.
Generally
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Generally,
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the table Compares five countries in
term
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terms
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of their beginning, how it changed after 15
years
,
maximum
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the maximum
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salary
and how much time they
spend
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spent
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to reach
this
maximum
salary
. The highest
salary
all the time had Luxemburg, beginning
with
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at
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80,000
,
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apply
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after
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and after
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15
years
was 119,000.
Also
maximum was 132,000. Australia had the lowest
salaries
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salary
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28,000 after 15
years
with Korea they had
a
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the
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same salaries 48 000,
that
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which
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was
also
maximum
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the maximum
a maximum
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number of
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apply
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salary
for Australia. Korea’s high school
teachers
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teachers'
teacher's
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salary
was
maximum
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a maximum
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62
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of 62
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000. For Japan to reach
maximum
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a maximum
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salary
86000
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of 86000
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took 37
years
which is the greatest among other countries.
Furthermore
for Denmark to achieve
own
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its own
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high
salary
needed only 8
years
. After Denmark Australia spent one of the lowest
years
for its maximum
salary
9
years
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words salary, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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