The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. ag
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The table presents information about
Tutor’s
Correct article usage
the Tutor’s
salary
and how much they got in 2009 by working at High School.
Generally
the table Compares five countries in Add a comma
Generally,
term
of their beginning, how it changed after 15 Fix the agreement mistake
terms
years
, maximum
Correct article usage
the maximum
salary
and how much time they spend
to reach Wrong verb form
spent
this
maximum salary
.
The highest salary
all the time had Luxemburg, beginning with
80,000Change preposition
at
,
Remove the comma
apply
after
15 Correct word choice
and after
years
was 119,000. Also
maximum was 132,000. Australia had the lowest salaries
28,000 after 15 Fix the agreement mistake
salary
years
with Korea they had a
same salaries 48 000, Correct article usage
the
that
was Correct pronoun usage
which
also
maximum
Add an article
the maximum
a maximum
number of
Correct quantifier usage
apply
salary
for Australia. Korea’s high school teachers
Change noun form
teachers'
teacher's
salary
was maximum
Correct article usage
a maximum
62
000.
For Japan to reach Change preposition
of 62
maximum
Correct article usage
a maximum
salary
86000
took 37 Change preposition
of 86000
years
which is the greatest among other countries. Furthermore
for Denmark to achieve own
high Correct pronoun usage
its own
salary
needed only 8 years
. After Denmark Australia spent one of the lowest years
for its maximum salary
9 years
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words salary, years with synonyms.
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