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The map below shows the plan of a proposed new town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the plan of a proposed new town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given diagram illustrates the planned
map
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 for a new
area
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.
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, the majority of entire
areas
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 in
this
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town
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 would be expected to be housing. Residents who settle down in
this
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town
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 have been equipped with many supportive facilities and infrastructure,
along with
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 recreational and industrial needs. One of the most prominent features of
this
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map
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 is the allocation of housing
areas
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. They are universally present everywhere
in
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 the planned
map
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 and encircle the whole central region of
this
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town
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. They are not only extended outward to the outer
area
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 of the
town
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 but
also
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in
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two
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 opposite ends of the
map
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 where
two
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 industrial zones are located. Remarkably,
two
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 bus stops
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two
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 parking
areas
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 are at
the
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each corner of the central location, which is encircled by a circular road forming the core of the
town
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.
This
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 rectangular
area
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 has four roads connecting to the outer
area
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. One of them in the southern connects
this
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area
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 with four recreational
areas
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 along the road. One more recreational
area
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 is on the right side of the central region.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "along with".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words map, area, areas, town, two with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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