The map below shows the plan of a proposed new town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the plan of a proposed new town.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates the planned
map
for a new
area
.
Overall
, the majority of entire
areas
in
this
town
would be expected to be housing. Residents who settle down in
this
town
have been equipped with many supportive facilities and infrastructure,
along with
recreational and industrial needs. One of the most prominent features of
this
map
is the allocation of housing
areas
. They are universally present everywhere
in
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the planned
map
and encircle the whole central region of
this
town
. They are not only extended outward to the outer
area
of the
town
but
also
in
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two
opposite ends of the
map
where
two
industrial zones are located. Remarkably,
two
bus stops
along with
two
parking
areas
are at
the
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each corner of the central location, which is encircled by a circular road forming the core of the
town
.
This
rectangular
area
has four roads connecting to the outer
area
. One of them in the southern connects
this
area
with four recreational
areas
along the road. One more recreational
area
is on the right side of the central region.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "along with".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words map, area, areas, town, two with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 4 times.
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