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The maps below show the changes that occured to na town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should k

The maps below show the changes that occured to na town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should k
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The given maps show the changes
Willington
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in Willington
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town
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in
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over
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 three different centuries It is clearly seen that
,
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the main changes were homes,
villages
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and villages
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.The small rural village transformed into a largely residential area In 1780, Willington was a small
town
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 with just 100 homes, mostly located to the east of the river. The surrounding area was mainly farmland and woodland, and there were no major roads or bridges in place. By 1860, the
town
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 had grown a bit, with 200 homes and the addition of a bridge over the river. Some of the farmland
was
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disappeared
for
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from
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 the built houses. By 2000, the
town
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 had changed a lot. The number of houses increased to 500, and the road network expanded. New buildings, like a school and a sports field, were
also
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 built. Farmland and forests were destroyed to make way for the
town
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’s expansion.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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