The bar chart shows the percentage of what people in four countries spent their money on in 2009
The bar chart demonstrates the proportions of how much residents of four countries (the United
Stated
, Canada, Great Britain and Japan) paid for different products and services in 2009.
In each of the four nations, most of the money went to eating and drinking, accommodation, and transportation, Correct your spelling
States
whereas
people had to Linking Words
expend
far less on healthcare and clothing.
The Japanese and Britons spent 23% and 20% of their earnings on foodstuffs respectively, Verb problem
spend
while
the figures in Canada and the U.S. were around 15%. Linking Words
However
, Americans made the most investment in housing, with over a quarter of their income set aside for Linking Words
this
purpose. Surprisingly, their northern Linking Words
neighbors
, Canadians, stand at the lower end of the spectrum, at 21%. When it comes to transportation, Change the spelling
neighbours
however
, Canadians came out atop, having spent about Linking Words
one fifth
of their money to Add a hyphen
one-fifth
this
end. Linking Words
In contrast
, transportation fares accounted for the least spending in Japan (10%).
Regarding the smaller shares, American expenditure on healthcare was the highest at 7%, Linking Words
while
the proportions in the other countries did not reach 5%. As far as clothes are concerned, items in Linking Words
this
category cost citizens of all these nations around 5% of their budgets.Linking Words
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