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The table below shows the number of temporary migrant worker in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the number of temporary migrant worker in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given data reveals how many temporary
migrants
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 were employed in four certain countries, Australia, New
Zealand
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, the United Kingdom, and the United States. Units were measured per thousand of
people
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 in the year of 2003 and 2006. 
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, it clearly can be seen that the United States has the highest proportion of migrant workers throughout all periods. New
Zealand
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 had the lowest total of
migrants
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 but with the highest level of
people
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 per thousand in the
last
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 year.  In terms of the highest number of
migrants
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overall
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 in the countries, the United in the first
years
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 started with 577.000
people
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, and in the next three
years
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 had a relatively stable rise to 678.000
people
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. Meanwhile, the United States took the first position, the United Kingdom the second place, in 2003 started in 137.000
people
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, and in 2006 increased to almost doubled to 266.000
people
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.  Regarding the lowest level of temporary
migrants
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, New
Zealand
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 stood at 65.000
people
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 in 2003, and in the
last
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years
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 had a less increase to 87000.
Although
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 that country had the lowest number of
migrants
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, New
Zealand
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 had the highest number of
migrants
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 per thousand in 2006 at 21.1. Following the other countries, Australia experienced a remain stable rise in both
years
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, at 152.000
people
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 and 219.000
people
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, respectively.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, overall".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words migrants, zealand, people, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • temporary migrant workers
  • trends
  • absolute numbers
  • per 1,000 people
  • growth rate
  • per capita
  • labor markets
  • economies
  • significant
  • imply
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