The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The given bar chart compares data about the annual GDP growth in 3 various countries from 2007 to 2010.
Overall
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, it was important that the trends of all countries other than Japan reduced over the period of 3 years.
According to
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the diagram, at the start,
Tunisa
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Tunisia
, the best country in GDP growth, hit nearly 6.3%;
then
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; it declined significantly and reported just over 3% in 2009;
thereafter
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, its proportion roughly stabilized until 2010. The next country was Ecuador;
additionally
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, it reached approximately 3% in 2007 after that it climbed considerably and touched vertex at just under 5%;
nevertheless
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, it went down overwhelmingly to the lowest mark at almost 1.2%;
however
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, it jumped slightly and recorded roughly 2.2% in 2010. The graph demonstrates that the
last
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country was Japanwhich fashion was
in contrast
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to the other countries' trends;
additionally
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, in the beginning, it scored 2% after that its fashion leapt enormously to 6.5% in 2010.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "additionally".
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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