Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email •recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn •explain how your friend could learn this sport •suggest that you both learn this sport together. Write at leasr 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin you letter as follows: Dear ...............,
Dear Anita,
I hope you and your family are all doing well, I heard you just broke your hand
while
playing volleyball and I was shoked
because I knew how much you love playing it. I hope It Correct your spelling
shocked
stoked
get
better soon and I can see you playing in big competitions as soon as possible.
There are many enjoyable sports that you can participate in, so you do not need to worry about that and just focus on your treatments, Change the verb form
gets
for
instance
you can start playing football, right? Add a comma
instance,
and
as I remember, you really loved it. I think Capitalize word
And
this
is a very good oportunity
to start learning it and guess what, It even does not need your hand Correct your spelling
opportunity
although
you still have to be careful, it can be dangeres
.
If you Correct your spelling
dangerous
are worry
about how you should learn it, I have to say there Change the verb form
are worried
is
lots of great classes in Change the verb form
are
this
city with an excellent trainers
, actually I know one of them, she was my sister's school teacher and believe me, she knows what she is doing.
In fact, it's been a Correct the article-noun agreement
an excellent trainer
excellent trainers
while
that
I want to Correct word choice
since
start
Add the particle
start to
know
how to play football and if you want, we can start it together, I can book Verb problem
learning
biginner
classes located Correct your spelling
beginner
beginners
in
downtown, It has both odd days and even days from 8 am to 4 pm. just tell me which one is suitable for you, Change preposition
apply
then
I book it for both of us.
It will be great to catch up again soon. give my best to everyone in your family. I look forward to hearing from you again.Submitted by parmida.kharazi on
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language
Consider checking for spelling and grammatical errors to enhance clarity, such as 'shoked' should be 'shocked', 'oportunity' should be 'opportunity', and 'dangeres' should be 'dangerous'.
structure
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea for clearer understanding.
task achievement
The letter provides a complete response to the task, recommending a new sport, explaining how to learn it, and offering to learn the sport together.
language
The tone of the letter is friendly and supportive, which is suitable for an email to a friend.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,