The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up- to-the minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.

The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up- to-the

minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.
The illustration shows the operation mode of
Australian
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the Australian
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Bureau of Meteorology about how to collect the newest weather
information
and produce reliable forecasts.
Overall
,
this
process is divided into 4 key stages, including incoming
information
, analysis and forecasting, preparing the broadcast and
finally
the broadcast. Advanced equipment and scientific analysis
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in each stage.
To begin
with, original
information
and data are collected from 3 different sources, satellite, radar and drifting buoy, output the satellite photo, radar screen and synoptic chart respectively, which have a significant impact on later calculations and predictions. In the third and fourth
stage
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stages
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, computers will perform precise calculations and analysis on various images and
information
, and
then
make predictions on the recent weather in every
regions
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of Australia, which will be broadcasted through various channels
such
as TV
newsreader
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newsreaders
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, radio and recorded announcement in order to make sure widespread public knowing the
information
to arrange daily plan.
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