Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: •Give details of the food and services you ordered •Describe the problems that occurred •Explain what you want the restaurant to do

#restaurant #manager #•give #food #services #•describe #•explain

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter to

expresss

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express

my annoyance regarding the service I had

last

night in your beautiful

resturant

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restaurant

. In fact, yesterday I had

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company and I recommended your place, so we

orderd

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ordered

2 dishes of rare stake with a special salad and my best friend wanted to have a Kebab with rice and for the beverage, it was 2 red wines with

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diet coca, as I remember.

although

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the design and environment

was

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awsome

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and the food was incredibly delicious, there was a big problem which made me

embarressed

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embarrassed

, it took you about 45 minutes to serve the meal and we were all starving and as I was the host, everyone asked me whether they serve it soon or not and they really made me uncomfortable. Actually, I guess the main reason for

this

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mistakes is the fact that there are not enough workers that can get over 20 or more people at the same time,

however

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they did their best, I think you need to not only employ more waiters, waitresses and chefs

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but

also

train them to be fast in serving and ordering in order to make people satisfied. I hope my letter finds you fine and

help

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your career. best regards, Parmida.

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coherence cohesion

Consider dividing ideas clearly into separate paragraphs to enhance readability.

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Add more detail to convey deeper insights about the dining experience.

suitable writing tone

You maintained a respectful and professional tone throughout your letter.

complete response

You clearly described the situation and your expectations from the restaurant.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

211 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: •Give details of the food and services you ordered •Describe the problems that occurred •Explain what you want the restaurant to do

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

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