The below table shows information and prediction regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.

The below table shows information and prediction regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.
The table illustrates the
percentage
of the
population
aged 65 and over in three countries (Canada,
Germany
and the
UK
) in between 1988 , 2000 and an estimated
percentage
for 2030.
Overall
, the
population
of elderly
people
is predicted to rise in all three countries over the period given. The highest
percentage
of older
people
was in
Germany
which is forecast to continue to remain the highest for the entire period
while
the lowest proportion can be seen in the
UK
According to
the table, between 1988 and 2000 the
percentage
of aged
people
in
Germany
and Canada went up by 5% to 25.32% and 20.67%
repectively
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respectively
.
On the other hand
,
UK
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the UK
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showed relatively
ittle
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little
change in
population
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the population
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of 65
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old or above remaining at just under 15%. By 2030, it is expected that the
population
of
people
aged 65 will increase by approximately 5% in all three countries. The
percentage
is predicted to reach 26% in Canada, 20.42% in
Germany
and 20.35% in the
UK
.
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