The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
The line graph illustrates the export percentages of Australia with Japan, US
China
and India from 1990 to 2012.
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, on the one hand, India and Linking Words
China
were the lowest and rose later with Use synonyms
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having a rapid increase. Use synonyms
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started on a high note and plummeted Correct article usage
the US
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and India had the lowest and constant percentages of below 5%. Use synonyms
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ended in 2012 being the lowest with around 6%. Japan had the highest percentage in 1990 at about 27%, had a decrease in 1995 and went down to around 19%. It had a constant fall up until 2012 when it was the second highest with around 18%. Though it started as the second lowest in 1990 with about 3%, it Use synonyms
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had the greatest increase and ended up having the highest percentage in 2012 at 30Linking Words
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