Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be byeee to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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successful

in any profession. A large number

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others think that getting

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vital

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say that getting

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will discuss both perspectives and

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explain how it is important.

Firstly

,

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the degree

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is the basic certificate which ensures that you meet the required criteria for a certain professional.During the

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you are not only taught the books but

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there are certain labs that ensure you have spent

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amout

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amount

of credit hours and now have

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amount of

knowledge

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experience

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real life

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situations

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play a remarkable role in the learning

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the basic concepts and ideas which are

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delved deeply

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the theory.

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account the facts.

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numerous

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experinece

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experience

you can understand the basics more efficiently.

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still

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learn

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certain

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of practical

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your CV so that in later

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Lastly

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encouraged

to gain practical

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experience

because you get

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in the early

years

of your career.

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most of the

people

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started earning

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initial

years

of their age they

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utilised to savings to start the companies which eventually paved their

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to success. In conclusion,

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education

or

knowledge

in any form is

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important

and has its own value.

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firmly

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believe

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that knowing something during the

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impacts.It makes you to

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understand

what is the background behind the

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big picture of the concepts.Concepts which are imprinted in the mind during education ensure that they are implemented in

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right way

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diverse

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