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Write a letter to your neighbor in your letter . Describe the problem . Say how long it has been a problem . Explain what action you want the neighbor to takes Write atleast 150 words

#neighbor #action #atleast
Dear Mr.Shah I am writing
this
 letter to inform you about the disturbance which
occures
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occurred
due to
loud
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a loud
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 sound from your house. Let me introduce myself
first,
I am Ashish Kyada, living just next to you. Maybe you are not aware
about
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of
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this
 problem as you are new to the
scoiety
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society
. As, I am an English teacher at St.Xaviour School,
everyday
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 I have to wake up early to go to school.
From
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For
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last
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the last
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 few days, there
was
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has been
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 too much noise from your house at night which
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has inturrupt
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inturrupt
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interrupt
interrupted
 me to sleep and
unfortunatly
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unfortunately
,
society
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society's
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 rule is to maintain silence after 11PM but I think you are not aware of it as you are new to
society
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the society
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. I personally suggest you
to
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apply
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use our
society
 club for your entertainment or kindly request you to think about
this
 matter and if possible, please follow
soceity
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society
rule
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rules
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 and maintain silence during night time at home. Request your support in
this
. See you
in
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at
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next
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the next
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society
 meeting. Yours
Sincerly
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Sincerely
, Ashish Kyada
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single idea per paragraph
Ensure paragraphs focus on a single main idea for greater clarity.
suitable writing tone
Maintain a formal and polite tone throughout the letter for higher suitability.
complete response
The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task by describing the problem, saying how long it has been happening, and suggesting a solution.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are appropriately used and contribute to a polite correspondence.
logical structure
The letter generally maintains a clear logical structure, with a clear introduction and progression.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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