Write a letter to your neighbor in your letter . Describe the problem . Say how long it has been a problem . Explain what action you want the neighbor to takes Write atleast 150 words

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Dear Mr.Shah I am writing

this

letter to inform you about the disturbance which

occures

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occurred

due to

loud

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a loud

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sound from your house. Let me introduce myself

first,

I am Ashish Kyada, living just next to you. Maybe you are not aware

about

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this

problem as you are new to the

scoiety

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society

. As, I am an English teacher at St.Xaviour School,

everyday

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every day

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I have to wake up early to go to school.

From

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For

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last

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the last

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few days, there

was

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has been

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too much noise from your house at night which

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has inturrupt

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inturrupt

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interrupt

interrupted

me to sleep and

unfortunatly

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unfortunately

society

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society's

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rule is to maintain silence after 11PM but I think you are not aware of it as you are new to

society

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the society

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. I personally suggest you

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apply

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use our

society

club for your entertainment or kindly request you to think about

this

matter and if possible, please follow

soceity

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society

rule

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rules

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and maintain silence during night time at home. Request your support in

this

. See you

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show examples

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the next

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society

meeting. Yours

Sincerly

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Sincerely

, Ashish Kyada

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single idea per paragraph

Ensure paragraphs focus on a single main idea for greater clarity.

suitable writing tone

Maintain a formal and polite tone throughout the letter for higher suitability.

complete response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task by describing the problem, saying how long it has been happening, and suggesting a solution.

greeting and closing

The greeting and closing are appropriately used and contribute to a polite correspondence.

logical structure

The letter generally maintains a clear logical structure, with a clear introduction and progression.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

166 words

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Write a letter to your neighbor in your letter . Describe the problem . Say how long it has been a problem . Explain what action you want the neighbor to takes Write atleast 150 words

The Closing

It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? You should write at least 250 words.

In some countries, companies allow people to work from home. In others, people are still expected to work in an office. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some teachers think that international students exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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Many cities are now turning parks and farmland into new housing developments. Is this a positive or negative development?