My name is Upinder Kaur and I graduated from your
collage
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college
last
year. I am writing Linking Words
this
letter to inform you that it would be my pleasure to give Linking Words
speech
about Add an article
a speech
this
college and Linking Words
their
opportunities in Correct pronoun usage
its
Correct pronoun usage
my carrier
carrier
.
After completing study Correct your spelling
career
from
your Change preposition
at
collage
, I applied for Correct your spelling
college
the
Correct article usage
a
job
in the biggest company Use synonyms
of
our city. Later on, they hired me as a manager of Change preposition
in
housekeeping
department. Add an article
the housekeeping
Therefore
I will explain my journey from Linking Words
collage
to Correct your spelling
college
get
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getting
Use synonyms
job
Add an article
a job
the job
to
Change preposition
as
the
Correct article usage
an
undergraduates
. Fix the agreement mistake
undergraduate
Morener
, I will encourage them to take part in different activities Correct your spelling
Furthermore
along with
Linking Words
required
programs. Students would be very Correct article usage
the required
interesting
If I Replace the word
interested
inform
them Wrong verb form
informed
all
the barriers that are faced Change preposition
of all
by
Change preposition
apply
me
Correct pronoun usage
apply
while
looking for Linking Words
the
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a
job
. They can be aware of all the problems that I facedUse synonyms
,
when I was a student.
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apply
Due to
my Linking Words
job
schedule, It is hard for me Use synonyms
deliver
my speech on weekdays. Luckily, My Add the particle
to deliver
vacations
has been approved by the director which starts from November 1 to November 15. Please inform me what time and date is suitable for you all Fix the agreement mistake
vacation
soon
as possible so that I can prepare myself for it.
Rephrase
as soon
your
sincerely,
Upinder KaurCorrect the word
yours