Nowadays, more people move away from their friends and families for work. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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transportation
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, more
people
can have
chance
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to move
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to another
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another cities
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or even countries for jobs, being away from their friends and families.
While
that issue has both advantages and drawbacks, I believe
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outweigh the disadvantages. One major benefit is
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access to better career
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. Generally,
people
are always seeking
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jobs with
higher
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payment
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and more valuable experience.
For instance
, individuals will be more willing to move to big cities or developed nations, for
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special areas like finance, advanced technology and engineering.
Although
the labour markets there will be much more competitive, they will still treat that as a chance to improve themselves with the additional soft skills and wider network. All of
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are essential for the employees. What's more, moving away from the familiar surroundings does efforts on personal development. Living in
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unfamiliar area can have
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incentive on
people
to
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something new, and adapt to a totally different environment. As follows, entering a new national labour market
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a job-seeker to get familiar
to
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their culture,
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their national languages, and
experting
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experience
some high-level knowledge.
However
, significant disadvantages
also
exist. The emotional challenges can be really serious in
this
case.
For example
,
people
who are abroad may miss the support from families, struggle with the feeling of loneliness and
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, and find it hard to get
together with
friends.
Additionally
, if the holidays or festivals come, those outside
home
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can be even more lonely and may
then
start to have mental problems.
As a consequence
,
while
the difficulty
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the
emtion
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emotion
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is still a big problem, the opportunities and personal growth
besides
jobs abroad are
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particular worthy
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. After dealing with
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questions,
people
can have a better future and greater self-value.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • career advancement
  • job opportunities
  • job market
  • salaries
  • personal growth
  • cultural horizons
  • adaptability
  • resilience
  • global perspective
  • emotional and psychological impact
  • loved ones
  • loneliness
  • homesickness
  • support network
  • long-distance relationships
  • emotional strain
  • face-to-face interactions
  • financial cost
  • housing deposits
  • travel costs
  • living expenses
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