Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

The foods and beverages which are produced using a large amount of

sugar

result in health issues. A certain part of society believes that the products which contain

sugar

should be more

pricey

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to prevent these kinds of problems. In my opinion,

this

is not the right approach

for

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making people avoid these products.

Firstly

, it is more important to inform people about the dangers of

sugar

rather than

increasing

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prices. The different lessons and classes at schools and universities should involve information about the dangers of

sugar

in

human

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body.

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,

the

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subjects

such

as anatomy can effectively teach the bad impacts of

sugar

on general well-being.

Additionally

, a certain amount of

sugar

intake is not harmful

for

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health.

Sugar

is a source of energy which can boost consumer's energy and improve their moods.

Secondly

, the extreme prices that have been set for

sugar

goods are not a solution to handle excessive

sugar

consumption. The people with special privileges who are financially wealthy can afford any price that has been assigned to the

sugar

products.

Furthermore

, there can be specific conditions that high costs may negatively impact the individuals' well-being.

For instance

, a minor part of

population

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the population

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suffer

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suffers

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from a chronic disease called "

Sugar

crisis" - a disorder in which if the person does not eat enough

sugar

that is

demanded by

body

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the body

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, it may cause depression, stress, and anxiety. 

To sum up

, the harm of

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sugar

in

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human health is obvious.

Although

some

suggests

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that high

sugar

prices may lead to less consumption, I firmly believe that

this

is not a direct solution to the problem and I recommend residents be made aware of the harms of

sugar

.