The diagram displays the changes in food consumption by Chinese people between 1985 and 2010.
The graph concerns
interval
between 1985 and 2010, the minimum consumption was meat Correct article usage
the interval
at
1985 and Change preposition
in
maximum
was fish Add an article
the maximum
at
2010.
Fish was Change preposition
in
most
consumed food and Correct article usage
the most
on
the 15 years graph Change preposition
in
flactuated
between 600 and 700 Correct your spelling
fluctuated
fluctuates
fluctuate
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but Use synonyms
further
rose gradually, meat Linking Words
by comparison
with fish did not rise that high than 200 Linking Words
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, Use synonyms
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the meats
meats
graph rose slowly during that 25 years.
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meat
consumption
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consume
fall
steadily in that 25 years from 500 Replace the word
fell
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apply
the
week to 200 Correct article usage
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