The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph illustrates information about money spent on

books

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in four countries -

Germany

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, France, Italy and

Austria

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- over a 10-year period from 1995 to 2005. It is clearly seen that

Germany

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spent more money on

books

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and over the period, spending on

books

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increased in all four countries. The number of people buying

books

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Germany

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was 80

million

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in 1995, but

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figure rose to 95

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dollars by the end of 2005. France and Italy displayed similar proportions with a relatively steady trend between 1995 and 1997, eventually reaching their peak around 2005 (about 50-75

million

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, respectively).

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Austria

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saw gradual growth from 1995 to 1999, with

Austria

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overtaking Italy in book sales in 2003 and the figure

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sharply to 65

million

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by 2005. In 2005 we see that all countries have increased their book sales, with

Germany

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having the highest sales figures. France and

Austria

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have similar figures,

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Italy has the lowest figure.

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