The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph illustrates information about money spent on

books

in four countries -

Germany

, France, Italy and

Austria

- over a 10-year period from 1995 to 2005. It is clearly seen that

Germany

spent more money on

books

and over the period, spending on

books

increased in all four countries. The number of people buying

books

Germany

was 80

million

in 1995, but

this

figure rose to 95

million

dollars by the end of 2005. France and Italy displayed similar proportions with a relatively steady trend between 1995 and 1997, eventually reaching their peak around 2005 (about 50-75

million

, respectively).

In contrast

Austria

saw gradual growth from 1995 to 1999, with

Austria

overtaking Italy in book sales in 2003 and the figure

rising

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rose

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sharply to 65

million

by 2005. In 2005 we see that all countries have increased their book sales, with

Germany

having the highest sales figures. France and

Austria

have similar figures,

while

Italy has the lowest figure.

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The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctors. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

fast food has become cheaper in recent years. do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature of their own country than other countries. Do you agree or disagree?

Directors of organzations receive much higher salaries than ordinary workers. Some think it is necessary, while ther think it is unfair. Discuss both view and give your opinion.