The table below gives information about the daily cost of water per person in five different countries. (Figures are based on the minimum daily requirement per peron of 11.5 litres.)

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The table emphasizes the daily expenditure of water by a single person in five different regions across the globe. The illustration is concreted on the least daily requirement per person of 11.5 litres.

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, in the case of daily cost per person and

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cost as

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of average daily wage, Tangania, a country of the African region, holds the first place.

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, people from the US are expected to have the lowest daily rate

as well as

the

least

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cost percentage. As Africa tends to be one of the poorest regions across the globe, people living here are expected to

expend

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a lot

for leading

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their lives.

As a result

, both of the phenomena for Tanzania and Uganda are the highest among all, as expected.

On the other hand

due to

higher average daily income, application of modern technologies and other lifestyle facilities, the costs

realted

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to daily households are,

however

, less expensive in the American and

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region, which can be proved from the table, where the citizens of the US and the UK don’t have to spend more than 0.85 cents and 1.3 cents consecutively.

However

, Pakistani people, located in the Asian region, are in a neutral position for sure.

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The table below gives information about the daily cost of water per person in five different countries. (Figures are based on the minimum daily requirement per peron of 11.5 litres.)

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