The graph below shows the changing patterns of access to modern technology in homes in the UK (expressed in percentage terms). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The line chart illustrates the proportion of changing
pattern
of Fix the agreement mistake
patterns
access
to 4 types of modern technology
such
as CD
player
and DVD player
and Mobile phone and Internet connection in home
from 1994 to 2008.
In general, Add an article
the home
a home
accessing
to all modern Replace the word
access
technology
experienced an upward trend over the period, with DVD
Correct article usage
the DVD
player
being the modern technology
with the highest percentage of access
at home in 2008.
The percentage of access
to CD
player
and Mobile Fix the agreement mistake
players
phone
Fix the agreement mistake
phones
were
always higher than Correct subject-verb agreement
was
those
of the other two modern technologies Correct determiner usage
that
however
they also
experienced a similar trend. While
the figure for CD
player
rose from about 45% in 1994/95 to about 85 % in 2008, the figure for Mobile Fix the agreement mistake
players
phone
increased from about 18% in 1996/97to about 80% in 2008..starting at about 10% in 1998/1999, the proportion of Fix the agreement mistake
phones
access
to Internet connection as a modern technology
increased to about 65% in 2008.
Access
to DVD player
started In 2002/03 from approximately 30%, Fix the agreement mistake
players
however
Add a comma
however,
this
figure rose dramatically to about 80% and continued geniuenly
to peak at roughly 90% in 2008.
Despite Correct your spelling
genuinely
of
Change preposition
apply
all
,reading trends Correct determiner usage
this
shows
that Correct subject-verb agreement
show
majority
spreads of Correct article usage
the majority
access
to CD
player
was more popular in those years.Fix the agreement mistake
players
Submitted by t.jenab on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words access, technology, cd, player with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 7 times.
▼
Ultimate Speaking practice for IELTS
Practice speaking step by step, answer real-life questions, and build your confidence. Start your free trial and improve your speaking skills today!