The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000
The bar charts compare the
employment
rates
of men
and women
aged 60-64 in Australia, Japan
, the USA, and Belgium in 1970 and 2000. Overall
, there was a significant increase in employment
rates
for both genders across all countries, with women
experiencing a huge rise.
Men
's employment
rates
were generally higher than women
's in both years. Japan
and Belgium had the highest percentages of employed men
in 2000, with figures exceeding 75%. While
Australia and the USA also
saw growth in male employment
, their rates
remained lower than those of Japan
and Belgium.
In contrast
to men
, women
's employment
rates
were sharply lower in 1970. on the other hand
, there was a notable increase in female employment
across all countries by 2000. Japan
experienced the most substantial growth, with the percentage of employed women
almost doubling over the three-decade period.
In conclusion, both men
and women
aged 60-64 experienced increased employment
rates
between 1970 and 2000. However
, the rise in female employment
was particularly noteworthy, suggesting a shift in societal attitudes towards older women
in the workforce.Submitted by bajahzar90 on
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