The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000

The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000
The bar charts compare the
employment
rates
of
men
and
women
aged 60-64 in Australia,
Japan
, the USA, and Belgium in 1970 and 2000.
Overall
, there was a significant increase in
employment
rates
for both genders across all countries, with
women
experiencing a huge rise.
Men
's
employment
rates
were generally higher than
women
's in both years.
Japan
and Belgium had the highest percentages of employed
men
in 2000, with figures exceeding 75%.
While
Australia and the USA
also
saw growth in male
employment
, their
rates
remained lower than those of
Japan
and Belgium.
In contrast
to
men
,
women
's
employment
rates
were sharply lower in 1970.
on the other hand
, there was a notable increase in female
employment
across all countries by 2000.
Japan
experienced the most substantial growth, with the percentage of employed
women
almost doubling over the three-decade period. In conclusion, both
men
and
women
aged 60-64 experienced increased
employment
rates
between 1970 and 2000.
However
, the rise in female
employment
was particularly noteworthy, suggesting a shift in societal attitudes towards older
women
in the workforce.
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