You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter- -describe the problem with the equipment -explain how this problem is affecting your work - say what you want the shop or company to do

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
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letter
about
problem
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the problem
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of
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with
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my
heatset
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headset
. I bought
this
equipment
before
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apply
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one month
for
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ago for
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my work
purpours
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purposes
purports
. I am doing
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clases
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classes
class
for students
wheil
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which
it
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apply
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is
signifcant
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significant
for my work. when
i
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ready for class to use
last
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it last
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night it
is
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did
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not work. I
dont
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don't
know
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WhatsApp and
that. but before a day it was worked. I
was struggled
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to do the
calss
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class
and for
the
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that
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reason
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cancelled the class. I did not expect
this
movement.
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, when
i
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bought
this
item your company gived
six
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a
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month
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six-month
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warrenty
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warranty
therefore
you have to
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change
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this
thinkg
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thing
thinking
for me
immediatly
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immediately
. do not give
repaire
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repair
this
item.
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want
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vey quikly
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very quick
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am going to play online
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classes
our
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students. they are very interesting
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classes
. I expect your
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valuable
reply soon.
fatithfully
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faithfully
Raam
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Coherence and Cohesion
Work on paragraphing to ensure each new idea or point is in a separate paragraph to improve clarity.
Task Achievement
Ensure the letter consistently maintains a formal tone and avoids informal language or grammar.
Task Achievement
You have addressed all the key points: describing the problem, explaining its impact, and requesting a solution, showing a good understanding of the task given.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your letter follows a recognizable structure with a greeting, body, and closing, which aids in readability.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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