You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The graph above shows a chain of process of making carbonated
beverage
. There are several steps required to make the drinks. These four steps are Fix the agreement mistake
beverages
water
cleaning; heating evaporation and carbonation; mixing; filtering and filling; and lastly
, packaging.
In the first step, raw water
is filtered, softened, and given some chemicals. Secondly
, the water
will go through a certain pump to reach electric heaters. After that, the raw water
must go through a cooling pipe and be induced with particles of carbon dioxide inside a large tank. At this
point, plain carbonated water
has already been produced. However
, it is still plain that it should lead to the third stage. In this
process, the water
is mixed with a colouring agent, syrup, and some flavouring to create a targeted odour and taste. After another filtering action, now it gets to the fourth stage. Step four involves bottles and cans in the process of filling the containers up. In the final stage, the cans and bottles need to be packed in boxes or cardboard to be transported to supermarkets and other distributor parties.
In a closer inspection, it can be seen that the liquid was filtered two times. It can be concluded that the first infiltration is intended to dispose of the bacteria and dangerous microbes from the raw natural water
. Meanwhile, the second infiltration was intended more to get the quality control done, since it is the final step where the water
can be corrected for any mistakes and malpractices before it is shut inside the packaging.
In conclusion, making carbonated beverage
includes cleaning raw Fix the agreement mistake
beverages
water
, evaporating and carbonation
, mixing it with colouring and flavouring agents, filling in some containers, and packing Replace the word
carbonating
into
boxes.Correct pronoun usage
it into
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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