The maps below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The layouts illustrate Porth
Harbout
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Harbour
both in its previous and modernized forms.
Overall
, the
harbor
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harbour
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has undergone significant changes, with the southern
side
being the most altered area. In 2000, there was only one shower and toilet section on the north
side
of the parking lots,
whereas
, nowadays, with one toilet and shower area
ajoining
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adjoining
each parking lot
on
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in
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the north direction.
Moreover
, the previous connection between the southern car park and the
side
road
is
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demolished, and now both parking areas are connected to the main
road
.
Moreover
, a new dock has been introduced on the north
side
of the map, accompanying the older one. Other significant changes include the transformation of a hotel and the alteration of its nearby areas. The former Castle on the southeastern
side
of the shore is transformed into a hotel.
As a result
, the public is excluded from its adjacent beach.
Additionally
, a
road
has been branched off the southern
road
, which connects the hotel to the lifeboat and provides accessibility to the main
road
.
Also
, cafes and shops are constructed on the west
side
of the lifeboat.
Moreover
, areas allocated to the yacht and fishing boat are
also
inverted, with the private yacht located between the southern car park and cafes in the current setup.
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