The maps below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The layouts illustrate Porth

Harbout

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Harbour

both in its previous and modernized forms.

Overall

, the

harbor

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harbour

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has undergone significant changes, with the southern

side

being the most altered area. In 2000, there was only one shower and toilet section on the north

side

of the parking lots,

whereas

, nowadays, with one toilet and shower area

ajoining

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adjoining

each parking lot

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the north direction.

Moreover

, the previous connection between the southern car park and the

side

road

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demolished, and now both parking areas are connected to the main

road

Moreover

, a new dock has been introduced on the north

side

of the map, accompanying the older one. Other significant changes include the transformation of a hotel and the alteration of its nearby areas. The former Castle on the southeastern

side

of the shore is transformed into a hotel.

As a result

, the public is excluded from its adjacent beach.

Additionally

, a

road

has been branched off the southern

road

, which connects the hotel to the lifeboat and provides accessibility to the main

road

Also

, cafes and shops are constructed on the west

side

of the lifeboat.

Moreover

, areas allocated to the yacht and fishing boat are

also

inverted, with the private yacht located between the southern car park and cafes in the current setup.

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