The maps below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The layouts illustrate Porth

Harbout

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Harbour

both in its previous and modernized forms.

Overall

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, the

harbor

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harbour

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has undergone significant changes, with the southern

side

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being the most altered area. In 2000, there was only one shower and toilet section on the north

side

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of the parking lots,

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, nowadays, with one toilet and shower area

ajoining

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adjoining

each parking lot

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the north direction.

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, the previous connection between the southern car park and the

side

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road

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was

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demolished, and now both parking areas are connected to the main

road

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, a new dock has been introduced on the north

side

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of the map, accompanying the older one. Other significant changes include the transformation of a hotel and the alteration of its nearby areas. The former Castle on the southeastern

side

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of the shore is transformed into a hotel.

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, the public is excluded from its adjacent beach.

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, a

road

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has been branched off the southern

road

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, which connects the hotel to the lifeboat and provides accessibility to the main

road

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Also

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, cafes and shops are constructed on the west

side

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of the lifeboat.

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, areas allocated to the yacht and fishing boat are

also

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inverted, with the private yacht located between the southern car park and cafes in the current setup.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, moreover".

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words side, road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

213 words

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