The maps below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The layouts illustrate Porth

Harbout

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Harbour

both in its previous and modernized forms.

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, the

harbor

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has undergone significant changes, with the southern

side

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being the most altered area. In 2000, there was only one shower and toilet section on the north

side

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of the parking lots,

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, nowadays, with one toilet and shower area

ajoining

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adjoining

each parking lot

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the north direction.

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, the previous connection between the southern car park and the

side

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road

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was

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demolished, and now both parking areas are connected to the main

road

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, a new dock has been introduced on the north

side

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of the map, accompanying the older one. Other significant changes include the transformation of a hotel and the alteration of its nearby areas. The former Castle on the southeastern

side

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of the shore is transformed into a hotel.

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, the public is excluded from its adjacent beach.

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, a

road

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has been branched off the southern

road

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, which connects the hotel to the lifeboat and provides accessibility to the main

road

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, cafes and shops are constructed on the west

side

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of the lifeboat.

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, areas allocated to the yacht and fishing boat are

also

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inverted, with the private yacht located between the southern car park and cafes in the current setup.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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3 paragraphs

213 words

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The maps below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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