The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.

Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
Generally, in 1981
petroleum
was the most produced fuel,
while
natural
gas
was the least produced.
Additionally
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in
2000
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2000,
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the
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petroleum
remained on the top list,
while
the
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coal reached the lowest production point Over a 10
years
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year
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period from 1981 to1991 the
petroleum
decreased significantly to 100
million
tonnes
of
oil
, after hitting
it's
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its
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peak of 140
million
tonnes
of
oil
in 1986, during the same period the coal fluctuated and decreased from 80
million
tonnes
of
oil
to around 50
tonnes
of
oil
,
while
the natural
gas
remained static. During the period
of
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1991 to 200 the manufacturing
od
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of
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petroleum
gas
increase
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to reach again 140
million
tonnes
.
In addition
to
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the
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apply
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natural
gas
significantly increased to reach 100
million
tonnes
,
while
the
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coal slightly decreased to reach around 38
million
tonnes
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Vocabulary: Replace the words petroleum, gas, million, tonnes, oil with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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