The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates
that
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how
the
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nuclear
power
produced
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from
Uranium
.There are six steps
involve
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in the production of nuclear
power
from
skratch
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scratch
Skratch
.
First
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step is
natural
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the natural
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mineral
Uranium
in abstracted by
mining
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the mining
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process from the earth.
This
process is done with safety and precaution.
Secondly
, in the jar
Uranium
ore is converted and enriched to produce U-235
fuel
pallets which will be ready for the next procedure.
Next
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step is ,
this
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that this
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U-235
fuel
helps to generate
power
in the
uranium
plant
. After 4 years,
this
power
plant
has spared
fuel
and it needs to be removed from the
plant
. In the next
step
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some spared
fuel
can be reused
ans
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and
reproccessed and again it can be used to
genrate
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generate
power
in the
plant
. And
finally
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some of the fuels which can not used again ,
this
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can be collected in a container and dumped in the soil.
That is
the waste of
uranium
.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words power, uranium, fuel, plant with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nuclear fission
  • Radioactive material
  • Reactor core
  • Control rods
  • Coolant
  • Thermal energy
  • Steam generator
  • Turbine
  • Generator
  • Spent fuel
  • Radioactive waste
  • Depleted uranium
  • Decommissioning
  • Sustainable energy
  • Nuclear proliferation
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