The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates
that
how Correct word choice
apply
the
nuclear Correct article usage
apply
power
produced
from Add a missing verb
is produced
Uranium
.There are six steps involve
in the production of nuclear Change the form of the verb
involved
power
from skratch
.
Correct your spelling
scratch
Skratch
First
step is Change the article
The first
natural
mineral Correct article usage
the natural
Uranium
in abstracted by mining
process from the earth. Correct article usage
the mining
This
process is done with safety and precaution. Secondly
, in the jar Uranium
ore is converted and enriched to produce U-235 fuel
pallets which will be ready for the next procedure. Next
step is , Correct article usage
The next
this
U-235 Correct word choice
that this
fuel
helps to generate power
in the uranium
plant
.
After 4 years, this
power
plant
has spared fuel
and it needs to be removed from the plant
. In the next step
some spared Add a comma
step,
fuel
can be reused ans
reproccessed and again it can be used to Correct your spelling
and
genrate
Correct your spelling
generate
power
in the plant
.
And finally
some of the fuels which can not used again , Add a comma
finally,
this
can be collected in a container and dumped in the soil. Correct determiner usage
apply
That is
the waste of uranium
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Vocabulary: Replace the words power, uranium, fuel, plant with synonyms.
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