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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams below depict the distribution of
water
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usage
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 measured in percentage in three fields, Industry,
agriculture
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, and domestic, in six regions: North
America
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, South Africa, Europe, Africa, Central
Asia
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, and South East
Asia
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.
Overall
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,
agriculture
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 clearly accounts for the highest share of
water
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usage
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, exceeding nearly 80% in most regions except Europe and North
America
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, where industry consumes the most
water
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, at about 50%. The most eye-catching trends are in Africa, Central
Asia
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, and South East
Asia
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, where agricultural
water
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 use is remarkably high at 84%, 88%, and 81%, respectively.
In contrast
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, industrial and domestic
usage
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 is nearly under 10%.
In addition
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, in South
America
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,
agriculture
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 accounts for 71% of
water
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usage
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,
while
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 domestic and industry comprise 19% and 10%.
Conversely
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, in North
America
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 and Europe, the trend is slightly distinct as the highest
water
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 consumption percentage is visible in the industrial section at around 50%,
agriculture
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 has the second place variable between 30% to 39%, and domestic
usage
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 ranges from 13% to 15%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, usage, agriculture, america, asia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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