You live close to a restaurant and have recently been disturbed by the noise coming from the restaurant in the evenings. Write a letter to owner of the restaurant. In your letter. 1. explain why you find the noise disturbing 2. suggest a way to solve the problem, 3. explain what you will do If the problem is not solved.

Dear Owner, I'm writing
this
letter to inform regards about noise disturbance from your restaurant. I'm a software developer and living in an apartment close to your restaurant in
this
area. In a past few month,
I'm doing
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work
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from home
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in
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an
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mnc
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company. I was not able to focus my work
due to
loud noise from your
restautrant
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restaurant
especially in the evening which affects
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the productive
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productive
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of my work. Yesterday,
i
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was meeting with one of my
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, they
couldnt
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couldn't
hear my voice properly.
As a result
, they complained to
manager
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. I suggest you
to
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minimise the
volumn
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volume
from the speaker and
also
install the volume roof wall which helps to reduce the noise. If you
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to
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necessary
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action to resolve
this
problem, I need to raise
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to the police. Hope you will take action as soon as possible. Thanks and Regards Dhivya Ravi
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suitable writing tone
Try to use a more formal tone throughout the letter, with correct grammar and punctuation to match the level of formality needed.
single idea per paragraph
Make sure each paragraph focuses on a specific idea or point to improve clarity.
logical structure
The letter is well-structured with a clear beginning, middle, and end.
complete response
You clearly outlined the issue and gave a reasonable suggestion to resolve the problem.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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