You live close to a restaurant and have recently been disturbed by the noise coming from the restaurant in the evenings. Write a letter to owner of the restaurant. In your letter. 1. explain why you find the noise disturbing 2. suggest a way to solve the problem, 3. explain what you will do If the problem is not solved.
Dear Owner,
I'm writing
this
letter to inform regards about noise disturbance from your restaurant. I'm a software developer and living in an apartment close to your restaurant in this
area. In a past few month, I'm doing
Verb problem
I've been
work
from home Wrong verb form
working
Change preposition
at in
in
Correct your spelling
an
mnc
company. I was not able to focus my work Correct your spelling
MNC
due to
loud noise from your restautrant
especially in the evening which affects Correct your spelling
restaurant
Correct article usage
the productive
productive
of my work. Yesterday, Replace the word
productivity
i
was meeting with one of my Change the capitalization
I
client
, they Change to a plural noun
clients
couldnt
hear my voice properly. Correct your spelling
couldn't
As a result
, they complained to manager
.
I suggest you Add an article
the manager
to
minimise the Remove the particle
apply
volumn
from the speaker and Correct your spelling
volume
also
install the volume roof wall which helps to reduce the noise. If you failed
to Wrong verb form
fail
do
Verb problem
take
necessary
action to resolve Correct article usage
the necessary
this
problem, I need to raise complaint
to the police. Hope you will take action as soon as possible.
Thanks and Regards
Dhivya RaviAdd an article
a complaint
the complaint
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suitable writing tone
Try to use a more formal tone throughout the letter, with correct grammar and punctuation to match the level of formality needed.
single idea per paragraph
Make sure each paragraph focuses on a specific idea or point to improve clarity.
logical structure
The letter is well-structured with a clear beginning, middle, and end.
complete response
You clearly outlined the issue and gave a reasonable suggestion to resolve the problem.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.