The tables show results of 2 surveys done in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living in a particular city. Units are measured in percentage. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The data depict two surveys conducted in 1980 and 2010 on factors of city living in a single town. The number of good education and employment factors have increased,

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environment

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and shops remain stable.

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the health

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and transportation sectors

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have

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declined.

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, good responses in education and employment aspects climbed up in 2010, from 72% and 62%

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to 82% and 72%, respectively. Similar to those, bad responses in both areas rose up

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9% and 23%,

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what it was in 1980. Moving on to the next aspects, environment and

retails

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’ positive reactions remained stable between 1980 and 2010, which declined incrementally from 72% and 64%

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to 71% and 60%, respectively. In comparison with previous factors, which were

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occurring

dramatic increase and steady state, health and transportation

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a significant drop in positive responses from 82% and 52%

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to 74% and 39%. Distinguished from the good

feedbacks

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, their neutral response

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showed

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slight

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a slight

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increase

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of around

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5%

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addition.