You are interested in applying for a job advertised in a local newspaper. Write a letter to the hiring manager expressing your interest and outlining your qualifications and experience.

Respected Hiring Manager, I am writing in terms of the job advertised by you in the local newspaper. I
ponder
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,
I
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can be
great
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fit for the role advertised
that is
ECE assistant.
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I want to apply for the job and I am happy to say that all conditions and the situation given in the newspaper are pretty good for me. Having said that, I want to tell
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I have completed
ECE
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the ECE
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assiant
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assistant
course from Western
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College plus I do have the First
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certificate.
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I have experience in
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field since I
was working
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Happy
kid daycare
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for 1 year
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is situated in Richmond. Regarding my schedule, I believe I am fine working
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10-hours
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10-hour
shift a day as required
also
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day off
is not a problem.
Furthermore
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I am quite passionate about my work and being
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punctual
is something that I am proud of myself.
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I am
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thinking of doing the ECE course to
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improve
my skills and qualities so I can deal with children, more professionally. For any
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enquiries
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you can contact me
thorugh
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through
my email. Regards Simran
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Make sure to proofread your letter for grammar and spelling to ensure professionalism.
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Try to fully match your qualifications and skills to the job requirements mentioned in the advertisement.
coherence cohesion
Ensure a smooth transition between ideas to improve the overall flow of the letter.
task achievement
The letter clearly states the applicant's qualifications and relevant experience, effectively meeting the task requirements.
coherence cohesion
The closing is polite and professional, which contributes to a positive tone.
coherence cohesion
The structure of the letter is clear, with a logical progression of ideas.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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