You are interested in applying for a job advertised in a local newspaper. Write a letter to the hiring manager expressing your interest and outlining your qualifications and experience.
Respected Hiring Manager,
I am writing in terms of the job advertised by you in the local newspaper. I
ponder
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wonder
I
can be Correct word choice
if I
great
fit for the role advertised Add an article
a great
that is
ECE assistant. Thus
I want to apply for the job and I am happy to say that all conditions and the situation given in the newspaper are pretty good for me.
Having said that, I want to tell that
I have completed Correct pronoun usage
you that
ECE
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the ECE
assiant
course from Western Correct your spelling
assistant
community
College plus I do have the First Capitalize word
Community
aid
certificate. Capitalize word
Aid
Moreover
I have experience in Add a comma
Moreover,
this
field since I was working
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worked
in
Happy Change preposition
at
kid daycare
for 1 year Correct your spelling
Kid Daycare
that
is situated in Richmond. Regarding my schedule, I believe I am fine working Correct pronoun usage
which
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a 10-hours
10-hours
shift a day as required Correct your spelling
10-hour
also
dayoff
is not a problem.
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day off
Furthermore
, I would like to tell that
I am quite passionate about my work and being Correct pronoun usage
you that
pucntual
is something that I am proud of myself. Correct your spelling
punctual
Lastly
I am Add a comma
Lastly,
also
thinking of doing the ECE course to imrove
my skills and qualities so I can deal with children, more professionally. For any Correct your spelling
improve
further
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enquiries
queries
enqueries
you can contact me Add a comma
enqueries,
thorugh
my email.
Regards
SimranCorrect your spelling
through
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Make sure to proofread your letter for grammar and spelling to ensure professionalism.
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Try to fully match your qualifications and skills to the job requirements mentioned in the advertisement.
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Ensure a smooth transition between ideas to improve the overall flow of the letter.
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The letter clearly states the applicant's qualifications and relevant experience, effectively meeting the task requirements.
coherence cohesion
The closing is polite and professional, which contributes to a positive tone.
coherence cohesion
The structure of the letter is clear, with a logical progression of ideas.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.