The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901

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information about how many

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and

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had in England and Wales in a

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fifty-year

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period between 1851 and 1901.

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, as it is illustrated, there was a considerable upward

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in the

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of

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,

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the

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of

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average

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saw a dramatic fall over the period.

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, from the statistics of men and women ,who were employed by these

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, it is noticeable that the

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of male

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were

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far more than the woman

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each year, despite 1861.

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, the total

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of

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started at 225 in 1851, and

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figure increased to a tiny 227 in 1861.

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, after

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there was a sharp rise to 622 in the next decade, and

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the index fluctuated over the three decades, at which it levelled off at just 600 in 1901. Considering the

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of total

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, the trend was

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. Starting from 477 100 the figure

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dramatically to 291 780 in 1861,following that, the

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gradually went down and finished at 61 000

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of the period. Moving to the data about the

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of men and woman

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in these

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, at the beginning there were 287 100 male and 190 000 female

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. The year 1861 marked a turning point, as

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numbers

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of both

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began to fall sharply, to 131 780 male and 160 000 female

employees

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1861 was

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only year in which, the

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of female

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was greater

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to the

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of male

employees

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.